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 =  fir de mac
Nic
[07.Aug.02 18:04]
Cred ca ar fi mult mai bine daca ai scoate ultimul vers ca sa se termine in fir de mac.

 =  da...
krimeea
[12.Aug.02 18:22]
draga nic-ule ,ultimul vers era menit sa dea circularitate poeziei si intr-adevar este dispensabil...




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