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nica mădălina
[14.Jan.09 10:25]
nu are echilibru intre aglomeratia crispata din primele doua strofe si simplismul trantit in ultimele doua.
o prelucrare drastica nu cred ca ar strica.

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Ioana Camelia Popa
[14.Jan.09 10:37]
Lumea cum este. Lumea mea. Uneori este un mare contrast intre mine si lume, poate ca o prelucrare drastica nu ar strica daca eu as fi altcineva.




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