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emilian pal
[19.Mar.06 00:30]
Cred ca ar fi fost incadrat mai bine la personale, in opinia mea. Limbajul e putin discontinuu si incarcat, insa atmosfera e frumoasa. La final as fi eliminat "parca nu te stiam asa gri". Numai bine, Emil.

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Alina T. (Manole)
[20.Mar.06 20:57]
Multumesc Emil de observatii. Intr/adevar, finalul nu e tocmai cel mai potrivit. Mai caut.




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