| = great | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [07.Jun.05 13:45] |
| Thank you for this poem... It lightens up my feelings each time I read it... You used great personifications ('moon's eyes, lips...'), you've made a revery from the last strophe..., this passing from the real side in the first part of the poem to the dream side from the second part being very interesting. Wonderful sensations! | |