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In afara de ritm si masura totul e ok!
Bita Iulia Adriana
[17.Jan.06 22:07]
Poezia este superba, imi place foarte mult...insa in unele locuri ii cam liseste ritmul si masura:).Oricum este destul de reusita. Bravo Gabytzu!
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