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Stoica Dan
[06.Oct.20 18:03]
Poemul este indubitabil dpdv structural reusit. Totusi anumite idei le gasesc ca fiind cumva altmodisch, reluate din niste timpuri mai indepartate. Ultima strofa mi-a creat impresia unei naivitati exagerate, a unei utopii atat formale cat si de esenta, exprimata cumva gimnazial.

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= ...	Stoica Dan [06.Oct.20 18:03]
Poemul este indubitabil dpdv structural reusit. Totusi anumite idei le gasesc ca fiind cumva altmodisch, reluate din niste timpuri mai indepartate. Ultima strofa mi-a creat impresia unei naivitati exagerate, a unei utopii atat formale cat si de esenta, exprimata cumva gimnazial.