| = My hope... | Daniela Maria Benea [03.Nov.06 22:34] |
| Sometimes it's hard (not is hard) You only feel like crying (not cry) This poem is in a very very broken English. My hope is that you improve your language skills (this has nothing to do with your ability to write poems, I hope you understand what I had to say here). | |
| = don't be quite sure | Emil Carageorge [13.Nov.06 00:40] |
| Daniela, "feel like cry" is not a mistake and is different than "feel like crying", so you are wrong. Her English is not bad, but that poem sounds like pop-music lyrics, easy listening, with limited vocabulary. She might try harder to get some better results, don't you think so? | |
| = Emil | Daniela Maria Benea [16.Nov.06 15:08] |
| Emil, in that case, it should be feel like a cry...I don't know, I might be in the wrong here, but to me, it just doesn't sound right, even if it's like you say, song lyrics. I could go further and give you examples of this in Romanian...but I give up, and as a note, my comment shouldn't necessarily be read as a criticism to her ability to write poems. | |