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Andrei Balan
[23.Oct.10 19:12]
imi place tema pe care ai abordat-o si mi se pare un poem reusit
... nu cred ca inversiunea din ultimul vers al strofei a doua isi are rostul ("a lor mister"), merge si 'misterul lor'

o seara placuta!




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