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 =  ca un bou?
Lory Cristea
[15.May.05 17:03]
Dupa parerea mea, textul nu e rau, si ideea e frumoasa, mi-a placut cum valsezi tu cu umbra ingerului, dar fa ceva cu:,,am privit cu sufletul, ca boul``, ca e ca un fel de bata in balta peste celelalte imagini.Te citesc.
Lory



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