| = Interesting.. | Yulia Volkova [14.May.05 17:50] |
| I love the first 2 stantzas..adorable " Penetrating on the blowing winds"...i can almost feel the cold all around me. Superb! Andrada | |
| = Nirvana | Diana Pacuraru [27.May.05 00:56] |
| On how did everything started. -> On how did everything start. Good poem and as Andrada said, I can feel the cold all around me, indeed. The cold of space... | |
| = When new questions arise... | raj thampi [28.May.05 14:49] |
| Once again Joshua :) I simply like the simplicity of your poems. So easily understood...by the way the title Nirvana? how you are going to relate it with the poem? Please explain. As far I know Nirvana means the following few things: "A state of liberation from unhappiness. Illumination, characterized by the merging of the individual, transitory I in consciousness. Nirvana frees one from suffering and fear of death. It is the highest, transcendent consciousness, referred to in the Bhagavad-Gita as brahman-nirvana, in the Upanishads as turiya, in yoga as nirbija-samadhi, and in Vedanta as nirvikalpa-samadhi." A state of mind which doesnt ask questions. How come your poem ends with a new question "Oh how did everything start." regards | |
| = answer to Raj | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [29.May.05 05:52] |
| The state of happiness is so called nirvana, as you say, A (state of liberation from unhappiness) That's why on the last part: " On how did everything start" It only emphasizes that finally the author feels the humming of happiness and freedom, that's why on the line that states: "Standing on the mountain’s peak" "Penetrating on the blowing winds" it mean i finally felt the wind of freedom around! | |
| = Again. | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [29.May.05 05:55] |
| Nirvana has finally reached within me as you can read on my text, everything seems to ba a pleasure and an infinite happiness, one word NIRVANA is the happiness | |
| = Nirvana | raj thampi [29.May.05 14:06] |
| Indeed, after all it entirely depends how one feels it. | |