| = o blessèd beast | corina dragomir [16.May.05 16:47] |
| primeval theme, a definite sense of visionary setting, typical of a Conan movie with all those nemedians and aquilonians etc., wherefore it is said, *behind the shoulders of the bride the serpent rears his head*. personally, I’m into believing that the second stanza opens the gate for a metaphysical synopsis which succeeds at this level only in seizing the idea (you had in mind) so much so that becomes a snare for a pre-planned esoterical quest. ask yourself why past remains on the steps of present time while future undecidedly awaits maybe you can find another verb in v 13, the repetition *enjoy the joy* proves to be quite disturbing in the rhythm scheme. last but not least, I found as inappropriate: *hail sexy heart of flame*. it knocks me down after such an interesting itinerary, equally inducing me what must surely stand as modern man’s laconic attitude towards women. >ye shall see that hour, o blessèd beast, and thou the scarlet concubine of his desire!:) | |