| = green opinion | Grosu Luiza-Oana [20.May.05 02:43] |
| dear sanda, don't be angry with me, but your poem it's too common. it has no mesage, it doesn't say anything to me. it's not even a haiku. what's the bundle between ink, grass and the act of surfing "in" spring's water? I didn't read the poem in Romanian, but i think there was correct "on" water. | |