| = Enigma | Edilberto González Trejos [15.Jun.05 16:00] |
| Enigmatic poem, indeed, full of smart figures. Just one suggestion, If I may, Roxana "It is forbidden that we dream," could also be "It is forbidden for us to dream," or "Dreaming has been forbidden to us,"... Just playing with words... YOUR POEM IS GREAT! Cheers Poetess, Songo | |
| = dream within a dream... | Breazu Roxana Eugenia [15.Jun.05 20:03] |
| :))... Dreaming has not been forbidden to us...that is why we write :)) All the best! Roxana | |
| = Understanding dreams | Edilberto González Trejos [16.Jun.05 01:35] |
| Cool!... "entendu" my dear Poetess Best to you :o) SONGO | |