| = WOW! | Oana Balta [07.Aug.05 04:00] |
| Amazing poem, what can I say?!I like the awkward but extraordinary way you mix words.I have just one question: is it inspired in a way by "A Clockwork Orange", by Burgess? Keep up the good work! | |
| = Gothic, schizo, Kafkaesque | Edilberto González Trejos [05.Aug.05 00:38] |
| Celtic mist amidst a brainy ocean, deadly realms of my haunting conscience... A surreal nightmare, yet somehow POSSIBLE... Simply interesting Andreea! Songo | |
| = Kafkaesque | andreea l. [05.Aug.05 13:52] |
| very possible, as long as "I AM" lasts for more than five seconds. cheers, songo. thanks :) | |
| = a Kafkaesque clockwork orange | andreea l. [12.Aug.05 16:14] |
| thanks, Oana. the clockwork orange in my text is the "myself" I'm trying to put to sleep by electric shock therapy, consisting of literature mainly. my narcotic view of myself, narcotics-free. trying to be more like me and less like "them" is challenging. inside the mechanical walls of the world outside myself, i find it difficult sometimes to preserve my state of being a simple orange. who doesn't,anyway? as far as Burgess in concerned, oh, yeah! i love him! he's been the shadow hovering above me at the time this poem was written. Kafka and Burgess, my orange tree maybe(and so much more) | |