| = I wonder | Laura Cherecheº [22.Jun.09 17:01] |
| why you use capital letters on each line, the poems seem to lose a little bit of their natural flow. I like very much: "What kind of Fear Bottles up The smell of the Broken heart?" cheers! | |
| = so | Laurenţiu Ion [22.Jun.09 17:27] |
| I agree with laura! you should let everything to flow, obviously, without capital letters. it's more suitable for your readers! best regards :) | |
| + B for beautiful! | Corina Gina Papouis [22.Jun.09 17:59] |
| this is a beautiful poem, with Capital B:)!! .. although the last two lines could go as it softens the message. The title takes care of the ending!:) I would like to agree with my previous two commentators: capitals can go, although I know when you write it in Bromley Road and then you put it into ward on your PC it goes into a self-check mode..don't allow it! nevertheless your personal poetry style is coming through and I would like to add a little sign of appreciation towards that. Best wishes! Corina | |
| = =it wasn't me! | Gunsel DJEMAL [22.Jun.09 23:17] |
| Thanks to all of you. I always treasure comments. However, it was my new lap-top...getting use to it. Even though I scribble on the train... I always finish them of at BROMLEY Road. Thanks again. Cheers! | |
| = Warmest regards | oana blandiana betlevy [23.Jun.09 23:31] |
| I have enjoyed reading your poem;thank you. | |
| = my pleasure | Gunsel DJEMAL [24.Jun.09 07:40] |
Than you Oana.:))) | |
| = B! Star | Gunsel DJEMAL [25.Jun.09 13:40] |
| By the way Corina thanks for my B! Star... | |