| = we are screwed:) | Corina Gina Papouis [22.Jun.09 00:44] |
| for me the poem ended at 'did you live?' i would also review some words like bed's (was it beds?), tidy up a few verses: 'like a film tape' (a film). for me is a bit too long, or maybe i got the message too soon?:)) either way, we are screwed! keep them coming, Gunsel! cheers, Corina | |
| = =it was beds! | Gunsel DJEMAL [22.Jun.09 08:20] |
| Thanks Corina, your comment apreciated.:) | |