| = maturity | Constantin Delca [24.Jun.09 16:12] |
| i'm pretty sure is "eyebrows". i think it's a nice text about your coming-of-age that gives you superiority over the opposing principle. but only by a complete understanding of it (rather than by its mocking) can an accomodation be reached. cheers! | |
| = high school text | Laurenţiu Ion [24.Jun.09 16:34] |
| bravery in a high school text - this text is more a river stone than a diamond, with great lines/ a clear expression of adolescence you have expressed it all so beautifully, so succinctly almost like a morning page in its essentialness i think you're able to go to the most simple space & see its beauty you're that sort of person who sees beauty in those things that other people overlook thanks for this poetry! | |
| = / | Ana Maria Gârlãu [24.Jun.09 17:02] |
| mocking isn`t a great word for what i`ve tried to say. this is a mini revolution, i`m fighting my obsessions. thank you for stopping by laurentiu, thanks for recommending this text | |
| = all right | Constantin Delca [24.Jun.09 17:12] |
| it's my fault, i chose the wrong word. anyway, i wasn't referring to your text in particular. good luck with your "mini revolution", sign me in if you need supporters, i'm good at breaking windows :) | |
| = nice | Diana Todea [27.Jun.09 15:59] |
| Your poem is nice, it has an urban flow and all teenagers' symbols. However I don't see why Laurentiu marked it with a red star. Just because it has a "freaky" punctuation. I don't think it's good enough, but this is my opinion. Cheers! | |
| = ... | Laurenţiu Ion [27.Jun.09 16:51] |
| we must try to promote all kind of writing, not only those who speak about love, friendship etc please, do not make assumptions about my decisions, especially when they are well justified (e.g. Just because it has a "freaky" punctuation) so, attack the poem, not my decision!! thank you best regards :) | |
| = don't take it personally | Diana Todea [27.Jun.09 19:28] |
| I understand that, but I expressed my point of view. I'm not trying to attack you. Best wishes. | |
| = ... | Laurenţiu Ion [27.Jun.09 19:37] |
| not me, my decision I respect your point of view! & I didn't take it personally :) honestly | |
| = Cat/batwoman meets... | John Willy Kopperud [29.Jun.09 09:49] |
| ...the pecan/hamsandwicheating manchild living off the myths of the land. I enjoyed this blend of pop culture and poetic confrontation! Cheers from Willy | |
| = . | Ana Maria Gârlãu [02.Jul.09 01:38] |
| thanks for stopping by, i agree with diana, this text does not deserve the recommendation. mr. kopperud, thank you:) | |
| = ... | Laurenţiu Ion [02.Jul.09 01:39] |
| anamaria, it's your opinion en fin :) | |