| = MN | Corina Gina Papouis [24.Jun.09 19:23] |
| I kind of enjoyed the forensic analyses of the single, I suppose it takes guts to talk about it, being one:). At times the text was maybe too rich for me, too much info handed over, ‘over-cooked’, and ‘geez’ was irritating!..but all in all I think you brought to light a few issues of the single-life that could be of interest to readers of all sorts. The ending also merges towards self-pity: ‘I was hurt quite some time ago and my soul was burned.’ – well everyone has had that initiation phase. So to conclude: for me it was entertaining but not gripping. Best wishes! Corina | |