| = ... | Laurenţiu Ion [02.Jul.09 01:52] |
| you have approached a usual theme. I would have preferred to rely more on certain details that initially seem insignificant. with these details you could create a great atmosphere besides the usual theme anyway, in the second part the lines began to relax - this shows that you must get used to the text's subject and then you start to be more firmly in (that) position I don't know why, but in a certain way, you reminded me of Ezra | |
| = Laurentiu | Constantin Delca [02.Jul.09 10:39] |
| your opinions are pertinent and i'll take them into consideration. i know i can't support the same atmosphere and pace on the entire lenght of a text but i'll try to do my best. i don't know either why i remind you of ezra pound, but my hope is that one day i'll remind you of myself :) thanks a lot & cheers! | |
| = ... | Laura Cherecheº [03.Jul.09 20:47] |
| yes, it takes some time and much inspiration to shape your dreams and thoughts with a pen :) we are not poets, poetry comes from within... cheers! | |