| = the void | Corina Gina Papouis [27.Aug.09 12:48] |
| of the soul of a nation, property of the US of... thumbs up! let us enjoy the final sway! young blood, anyone? yes, we could be heroes! ..good protest, Dan! cheers, Corina | |
| = Once in a while, dan marius- | John Willy Kopperud [27.Aug.09 13:11] |
| -you post poems here that are among the most laden when it comes to politics/ views on life and death/conflicts. In this one your "cut and paste" technique does wonders for the outcome. It prevents the message from being too obvious and one-dimensional. Great work! | |
| = willy | dan marius [15.Sep.09 16:51] |
| yes I really enjoy this technique. it really helps me write freely. I am so glad you liked it. It is heavily influenced by bowie's "heroes" | |
| = x | felix nicolau [06.Jan.10 17:34] |
| i really liked it too an you were honest with the sources,great | |
| = felix | dan marius [09.Jan.10 11:01] |
| thank you felix. great to see you around. | |