| = =keep it burning... | Gunsel DJEMAL [28.Aug.09 14:22] |
| Hi Anna Lee Nice poem Cheers! | |
| = I like this one, Anna- | John Willy Kopperud [28.Aug.09 17:38] |
| -you have something to tell, yet you don't give away too much. Cheers from Willy | |
| = nice | Marius Surleac [28.Aug.09 20:25] |
| The simplicity and the wide message make this poem very expressive. Loved the last two lines in the second stanza. Good! | |
| = many thanks | Anna Lee [29.Aug.09 13:22] |
| to you all. I wasn't very sure about this one, especially about the last two lines, but if I got it right I'm quite happy. thanks a lot Gunsel, Willy and Marius. Cheers! | |