| = =Colours! | Gunsel DJEMAL [29.Aug.09 13:12] |
| Dear Danu nice short poem, please change "colors" to english version "colours". | |
| = Ok | Danut Gradinaru [29.Aug.09 14:58] |
| You are right! Thanks ( teşekuler ) ! | |
| = ! | Corina Gina Papouis [29.Aug.09 15:03] |
| is words there (plural!) and fluidly (adverb!). please make those changes so we can allow this text on the main page! Thank you! PS and to clarify colours/ colors are both correct versions of the same word: first one is English, second one is American. Provided you don't mix and match within the same text it is ok. | |
| = and | Corina Gina Papouis [29.Aug.09 15:28] |
| which not wich | |
| = Yes! | Danut Gradinaru [29.Aug.09 20:07] |
| Yes i doing. Thank you Corina! | |
| = ... | Marius Surleac [29.Aug.09 21:19] |
| Danut, I suggest to pay a bit more attention to the language used in comments ... some correct usage would be fine. Also, make a spell check before posting the texts, it's not so good to get in this stage word by word, after numerous verifications. | |
| = re Marius | Danut Gradinaru [29.Aug.09 23:27] |
| Understand, but is not easy for me. Thank you! | |
| = and yet another!:) | Corina Gina Papouis [30.Aug.09 12:44] |
| I know that enough talk has been made around this text, BUT, I have yet another suggestion to make: the is really unnecessary here, both in the title and in your first line: the poetry just doesn't sound right! So, it would be great if you can get rid of the THE!:)) cheers, Corina | |
| = + | Danut Gradinaru [30.Aug.09 21:46] |
| Thanks for suggestions and visit! | |