| = ! | Corina Gina Papouis [05.Sep.09 20:04] |
| I believe some lines would benefit from some clarity: 'A mother is not a woman' and then 'The Almighty chose a woman' I guess the divine message of your poem is slightly confusing, maybe you can make some adjustments. Cheers, Corina | |
| = thanks | mazHur [06.Sep.09 03:35] |
| thank you very much for pointing out the contradiction. regards | |