| = Ravens are extensions of their own fear- | John Willy Kopperud [21.Oct.09 19:40] |
| -hey, that's well put and a bit off the mainstream here, which is often a way to draw my attention. If the poem was furnished with a good title, I would grab a yellow star! Cheers from Willy | |
| = idyll | ion corina [22.Oct.09 11:00] |
| This is the original title of my text; I've first written a linked poem, then I decided to re-write it under a tanka form, that's why it came without a title. I'm glad you like it. Corina | |
| + I see- | John Willy Kopperud [22.Oct.09 16:03] |
| -and the title is a bit puzzling, which is quite all right. Good! Cheers from Willy | |