| = Great poem | Corina Gina Papouis [28.Oct.09 23:15] |
| ..but without that last stanza! cheers, Corina | |
| = agreed. | Dan Moldoveanu [29.Oct.09 14:33] |
| I agree... I did feel like I needed a conclusion though, and I forced it there... It still gives me a sense of unfinished, hanging, when I see it like this - though it may be desirable to let it hang. In fact, when I read the last verse I can't help but "reminding..." | |