| = Laura | Constantin Delca [07.Dec.09 18:26] |
| i like these bittersweet pills of poetry. your poems are like the free samples of an unprecious fragrance. but i think here the word 'subconsciousness' stands in the way of that beautifully running unicorn like a long and impenetrable wall. i would change it for a less abstract word however, your text makes me reflect on the whereabouts of my 'unicorns' :) cheers | |
| = Constantin | Laura Cherecheº [12.Dec.09 14:04] |
| I'm really flattered that you like the fragrance of my poems; thanks for your suggestion, I'll think it over:) Cheers! | |
| = The last unicorn | Cãtãrãu Alina - Andreea [22.Dec.09 17:12] |
| is the immortal world of fantasy - our world - which the real one could not understand. Only dreamers and artists can understand it, because their spirits run free like the unicorn. I adore the main idea of your poem1 | |