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Veronica Valeanu
[16.Dec.09 12:59]
untangled knots on the forgotten hands of time
rhythm
sonnets
life is not an aforethought scenario
time is no more
or real

i think you could eliminate some repetitions to make it more intense.
all my best,
V.V.

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Gunsel DJEMAL
[15.Dec.09 22:21]
thanks Veronica appreciate your advice:)

 =  Gunsel, you acted against the rules of this site-
Veronica Valeanu
[16.Dec.09 12:29]
please check once again the rules of this site - if they allow you to ERASE other people's comments! mine was a completely harmless one, drawing your attention upon some improvements that can be done in your text, nothing more.

in conclusion -put my comment back and act in a responsible way.

thank you.
V.V.

 =  =Apologies
Gunsel DJEMAL
[16.Dec.09 13:01]
Hi there Veronica

I do apologize however; I haven't erase your comment on purpose that was done in ERROR! Comments are precious for me. I was not aware of it until I saw your Email.

Thanks

 =  peace!:)
Corina Gina Papouis
[16.Dec.09 14:53]
It is your computer Gunsel! you need to have it checked... You have complained about posting from it before (repetitive errors and messages keep appearing).
I am sure Veronica understands.
Suggestion: speak to Father Christmas ASAP...:))

 =  =last option hey!
Gunsel DJEMAL
[16.Dec.09 19:46]
Dear Corina

It's not my PC it's my laptop doing it. I have already sent a letter to Farher Xmas and hopefully he will grant me a new one.:)




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