| + liked the style | Diana Todea [05.Aug.10 15:15] |
| I see here a new style of writing emerging in you with rich images. Maybe it's old you know it better, but I liked what you did here. Hope to see more of your poems. Cheers, Diana. | |
| = Comment | Lydia Percy [05.Aug.10 18:25] |
| Hello Diana, Thank you for the read I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Peace L | |
| + Loved this one too- | John Willy Kopperud [05.Aug.10 18:46] |
| -and that soul on 45 fits so nicely in with the other images! One title from the sixties (I think that track was with Aretha Franklin) comes to mind: "Midnight train to Georgia." Cheers from Willy | |
| = . | Corina Gina Papouis [10.Aug.10 14:33] |
| i shall join my previous commentators complementing you on this vivid and accelerating style, this poem came to me like a biography...(last stanza a typo! either promised/ or promises) Cheers from me too! | |
| = lepadah | Lydia Percy [10.Aug.10 19:14] |
| John & Corina Thanks for the read. Very humble by your comments. Peace 1 lepadah | |