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Veronica Valeanu
[28.Aug.10 10:14]
it is the same idea no matter if you insert comparisons or overuse repetitions - we, will, same- or alternative images where the passage from one to another is abrupt

by shrinking the text a little bit you will get it across more concised, and you will gain more exercise.

enjoy posting, giving feedback for other members and remember to post no more than 2 texts per day.


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