| = . | Veronica Valeanu [06.Sep.10 10:23] |
| this part still needs some polishing: In darkness, moons theft I shall, Flowering branches with its' thoughts All exchanged in winds flower. and here, this is too much: On cold days, my exhausted corpse Coiled just like a spring, like a fall, | |
| = . . | Claudiu GURGUTA [06.Sep.10 14:58] |
| Afternoon. I somehow got lost in the painting from which this started but I hope to have corrected and adapted my writing to what it should be like. I appreciate the advice and I have what to learn from a writer like you. If you can point me out some directions would be suitable for me to follow I will be very grateful. best wishes, Claudiu G | |