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Corina Gina Papouis
[30.Nov.10 23:09]
i quite liked the ending however i would have used 'lying on the hot bathroom floor', it just sounds better.

cheers!
Corina
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nica mãdãlina
[01.Dec.10 13:01]
yes, corina, it sounds not only better, but "more enghish" as well.
thanks for your words.

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= :)	Corina Gina Papouis [30.Nov.10 23:09]
i quite liked the ending however i would have used 'lying on the hot bathroom floor', it just sounds better. cheers! Corina

= .	nica mãdãlina [01.Dec.10 13:01]
yes, corina, it sounds not only better, but "more enghish" as well. thanks for your words.