| + title: deus ex machina | Veronica Valeanu [14.Jan.11 16:36] |
| i'm in a hurry sorry but it's good and strong i suggest a little change in the end: There’s two of me fighting over you : the keeper and the deceived one is the deus the other one the machina | |
| = Thank you | Andrada Ianosi [14.Jan.11 21:29] |
| Although I really liked the end you chose for my creation, I'll stick to mine for these reasons: 1. I don't think there are only 2 persons living inside my mind, but 3 or even more; 2. Splitting the human entity (almost)always involved the number "2", so I wanted this to be something more than a reiteration of the commonly used form. PS: The star made me feel better. Thank you | |
| = nice | Lynn West [14.Feb.11 06:19] |
| I like this one!! | |