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= Nice haiku
Luminita Suse
[01.Mar.11 15:29]
I would definitely remove the definite article from the first line. "Lying in grass/ resting on branches/ the whole univers". The modern English haiku does not follow the 5-7-5 syllable formula which only makes sense for Japanese language. So, no worries there...

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= Nice haiku	Luminita Suse [01.Mar.11 15:29]
I would definitely remove the definite article from the first line. "Lying in grass/ resting on branches/ the whole univers". The modern English haiku does not follow the 5-7-5 syllable formula which only makes sense for Japanese language. So, no worries there...