| = echo:) | Veronica Valeanu [17.May.11 09:28] |
| On such a night old birds die to fly their kites to the moon | |
| = Interesting echo, VV! | John Willy Kopperud [17.May.11 10:27] |
| In my version they "rise to the occasion." In yours they're simply "dying to fly their kites". I tend to like both. Cheers from Willy | |
| = Willy | Luminita Suse [19.May.11 01:57] |
| Beautiful imagery in few words. The Japanese spirit. Here and in the "Let me walk/ the park/ around you" and others. Are they pieces of a grander work? | |
| = Thanks a lot, Luminita | John Willy Kopperud [19.May.11 02:40] |
| -and I wonder if my shorties should be the wheels of a big old semi-trailer. Cheers from Willy | |