| = Strong lines | James A Williams [21.Jan.12 17:26] |
| I keep going down the list of your works and keep getting astounded, though I don't take the time to comment on each one. This one has the same power as the others, and makes me search deep in the lines. One very strong line "in time she learned to overcome guilt and piling dishes" and that only the doves know all about her calls. I confess that I had to look up the word fulgent (insert red-faced sticky here), and English is my mother tongue! I go back to your archives, thanks again for sharing, jaw | |