| = Petri... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [20.Jul.11 17:22] |
| Petrina, Intriguing sequence of well-rounded thoughts, so independent but interconnected nevertheless. Beautiful finishing touch of lyric anatomy. I would suggest Petri dish or Petri plate as box sends to some mathematical terminology which I guess wasn't exactly your intention... rcm | |
| = Thank you! | Mocanu Petrina [21.Jul.11 11:49] |
| Romulus, Thank you for reading and thank you for your comments! Years ago I worked in a microbiology laboratory ( this is where Petri boxes came from ):) After a too long break, I have started to write again few weeks ago (inspiration just showed up). I know the way I write can and needs to be improved so I keep trying :) Petrina | |
| = "boxes" to "dishes" or "plates"? | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [21.Jul.11 16:01] |
| So glad to read you. Have you thought about my suggestion re changing Petri "boxes" to "dishes" or "plates" which seems to be the correct alternative in your poem's case? rcm | |
| = Dishes it is | Mocanu Petrina [21.Jul.11 22:22] |
| Yes, I thought about it ( = I finally got it ) and I also changed it to dishes :) Thank you again!:) Petrina | |