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Corina Gina Papouis
[17.Oct.11 14:28]
Between the last two verses I would have loved another image/ maybe two, for the purpose of depth. I love short poems, but this appears to be a bit too simplistic for me.
Just an opinion, of course.:)
Cheers!

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= and..	Corina Gina Papouis [17.Oct.11 14:28]
Between the last two verses I would have loved another image/ maybe two, for the purpose of depth. I love short poems, but this appears to be a bit too simplistic for me. Just an opinion, of course.:) Cheers!