= No Rhyme | James A Williams [14.Jan.12 14:47] |
Try it without rhyming | |
= throw the ballast | ion a [15.Jan.12 04:53] |
i think James is right, right now rhyme and fixed form are just constraints for you, many other versions you could try, like: flip over when the page is done don't start using water to engrave a face you only need to embrace its shadow take your time | |
= Thank you very much for your precious piece of advice, however I am afraid I am | mia isabela deleanu [15.Jan.12 11:42] |
Thank you very much for your precious piece of advice, however I am afraid I am a prisoner of the rhyme :) | |
= James | James A Williams [15.Jan.12 12:11] |
Free youself! | |