| = . | Veronica Vãleanu [18.Jan.12 20:53] |
| I have a strange sensation about this text, I don't know why. In spite of all the things that need improvement, I guess somewhere in the future the glimpse that you're having here about writing down and reaching out poetry can be transformed in a larger vision. with a little bit of work, of course. keep up honing your skills. VV | |
| = welcome | Veronica Vãleanu [23.Jan.12 09:22] |
| welcome new member sure, I got the whole picture/ but this literary community's rule require that everyone should submit texts& comments in English. therefore you should make a little effort, I am sure that this will help you even more. I guess you were concentrated on the strategic map of rendering the message rather than on the vibration, the initial or the final one that's why I know there must be more than meets the eye on this path & that's why I will say no more about my perception unless it is confirmed that it can eventually be rendered with a human touch here because maps are the body but they must foster the soul and there must be a level higher than just seeing, as you mentioned maybe putting back the soul into it this is what I should expect, as a reader, from such a text I am curious to read some more texts in the future, to see what your writing is in search of also, it would help you a lot to give feedback to the others and be interactive on agonia regards, VV | |