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= It is very brief at this point.
Edward Wells II
[21.Apr.16 17:37]
The tone that seems to be developing is intriguing. I hope You will add to this piece. As the characters take shape more, You might try some standard formatting, such as dialogue tags.

thanks for sharing

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= It is very brief at this point.	Edward Wells II [21.Apr.16 17:37]
The tone that seems to be developing is intriguing. I hope You will add to this piece. As the characters take shape more, You might try some standard formatting, such as dialogue tags. thanks for sharing