| = not so simple... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [05.Dec.12 12:02] |
| Hi Marilena, I couldn't help noticing the lengthy gap between your last text and this one... You have a very personal touch for the thoughts you turn into poetry, which would be worth working on, with some more effort... For example, this text starts with you at the wheel, continuing into something that should have been more than the "bored" drifting of its end... I would fight my thoughts to stay in control through the always important endings. Even if your text is just simple thoughts... Looking forward to reading you more... rcm | |