| = Concerns... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [29.Oct.12 16:12] |
| Hi Andrada, I logged in after reading this poem, somewhat concerned, but nevertheless hoping that as any of us you are in the process of defining/redefining your stile, which I feel might be the case now. This poem, in my opinion barely makes it over the workshop level, which is probably the reason why it has been allowed to remain. Because if this wanted to be a classic poem, it's quite remote of the style's standards, being meanwhile something barely identifiable by free-style standards, too. Your writing doesn't lack neither identity, nor life, being scattered nevertheless amongst something that looks like frozen tears of a fresh deception... Let some time go by, return, and re-write as a soul which deserves a better body. With respect, rcm | |