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 =  grammar...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[11.Dec.12 12:48]
Please reconsider for grammar and syntax inconsistencies.


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Corina Gina Papouis
[14.Feb.13 15:49]
The rhythm of this poem is broken thus the poem doesn't flow.
It could be easily corrected.


 =  milk and honey
Dely Cristian Marian
[20.Feb.13 00:27]
It has that thing that arouses the curiosity. (I've been chasing after your heroes in my mind, as though I should know them; and more, like “what was so scary about that night??”) It's bitter but challenging still. Too bad you don't follow the recommended actions.


 =  ***
Bodea Diana Mihaela
[21.Nov.13 05:49]
Thank you all very much and please accept my apologies for not following the recomandation. I don't have enough time or inspiration these days to do it, but I promise I will.

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