| = catching a dancer... | Romulus Campan [23.Jan.13 22:31] |
| I can't really explain what your thoughts have stirred in me... I had for a moment, reading your before the last stanza, a feeling that Salinger has decided to rewrite his Catcher, this time about dancers. And please, do not think I am being sarcastic, or light... There's a primal sadness, like that of Holden's, in your "over and over"... It's like an innocence which doesn't want to leave, regardless of all it has seen... You've touched extraordinary depths with this narrative of memories old, yet described like they haven't happened yet. As for "the other side of a tear", simply wonderful... I guess that's why I am recommending it! rc | |
| = * | Dely Cristian Marian [24.Jan.13 21:29] |
| Dear friend, Your comment is very thoughtful, like applying a tourniquet to a green wound with the precision a few possess. Well, it's softened me for a while. So, let me put modesty aside to tell you that I knew if you'd make a move, I'd be facing a discovered check, and now I blame my experience I hadn't thought it over. Though, you should know I somewhat dissent from particular type of actions and I don't respond too well when I encounter any. In the mean while,I've straighten my weak bones and I feel as if your kind words are beyond my comprehension. Nevertheless, everybody cries.. Again I'm honored by your consideration, Romulus, and I thank you. With friendly respect, dcm | |
| = q | Dan Zafir [24.Apr.13 19:38] |
| Interesting read... one question, though... what is a blind grenade? | |
| = answer | Dan Zafir [26.Apr.13 09:16] |
| Pls disregard my previous question... after re-reading the poem it finally hit me. Your poem's layering is a bit difficult to distinguish when observed from the wrong(left) corner of the eye. From the other corner though, truly different (differently true) story. Thank you for posting it. | |
| = addendum | Dan Zafir [26.Apr.13 09:18] |
| Forgot to leave the key under the entrance mat. Ind=ank :) | |
| = . | Dely Cristian Marian [29.May.13 19:30] |
| There was something challenging in your words and I feel like I haven't been able to match it. Or, I just don't know it. Thank you. | |