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Paul Gabriel Sandu
[02.Feb.13 01:04]
sounds interesting;
sounds like a hidden quotation of that beautiful verse: "nature first green is gold"...

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Dely Cristian Marian
[02.Feb.13 10:15]

accommodating the eyes with transparency...
"diamonds and rust" [joan baez]

it's better to blur harmony's texture
if you know what I mean
when you go haikuin'.
nice "greenless green".

good luck,

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Bodea Diana Mihaela
[02.Feb.13 22:09]
Paul, Cristian, thank you for your comments.
Cristian - I know what you say about blurring the text, but I wanted to do it the other way around than a normal haiku poem. I still explore.

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Romulus Campan
[02.Feb.13 22:13]

Please be welcome for more comments, in an easier fashion:-)


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Bodea Diana Mihaela
[03.Feb.13 02:01]
Dely nice song, love the end.
always vague.

greenless green
u've always seen

RC always glad to read your words.

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Romulus Campan
[03.Feb.13 11:04]
I hope you noticed the "real" reason for my short intervention:-)


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Bodea Diana Mihaela
[03.Feb.13 19:14]
yes, i did or at least i think so - about dc's comment on the technique of haiku.

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Romulus Campan
[03.Feb.13 20:17]
Lol, I had a slight suspicion, that's why I intervened. No, not at all, it's about your level which changed a bit allowing you to freely comment without needing an editor's prior approval. I just informed you, my way:-)


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Bodea Diana Mihaela
[03.Feb.13 21:02]
Thank you for telling me for this is something I must take it serious and think two times before writing. I take it as a small responsability.

Sincerely, GG

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