| = * | Paul Gabriel Sandu [02.Feb.13 01:04] |
| sounds interesting; sounds like a hidden quotation of that beautiful verse: "nature first green is gold"... | |
| = green | Dely Cristian Marian [02.Feb.13 10:15] |
| hi! accommodating the eyes with transparency... "diamonds and rust" [joan baez] it's better to blur harmony's texture if you know what I mean when you go haikuin'. nice "greenless green". good luck, dcm | |
| = * | Bodea Diana Mihaela [02.Feb.13 22:09] |
| Paul, Cristian, thank you for your comments. Cristian - I know what you say about blurring the text, but I wanted to do it the other way around than a normal haiku poem. I still explore. | |
| = a bit easier... | Romulus Campan [02.Feb.13 22:13] |
| Hi DM Please be welcome for more comments, in an easier fashion:-) rc | |
| = thanks | Bodea Diana Mihaela [03.Feb.13 02:01] |
| Dely nice song, love the end. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bpD5_c2j1OM always vague. greenless green u've always seen RC always glad to read your words. | |
| = * | Romulus Campan [03.Feb.13 11:04] |
| I hope you noticed the "real" reason for my short intervention:-) rc | |
| = rcm | Bodea Diana Mihaela [03.Feb.13 19:14] |
| yes, i did or at least i think so - about dc's comment on the technique of haiku. | |
| = not exactly:-) | Romulus Campan [03.Feb.13 20:17] |
| Lol, I had a slight suspicion, that's why I intervened. No, not at all, it's about your level which changed a bit allowing you to freely comment without needing an editor's prior approval. I just informed you, my way:-) rc | |
| = thank you | Bodea Diana Mihaela [03.Feb.13 21:02] |
| Thank you for telling me for this is something I must take it serious and think two times before writing. I take it as a small responsability. Sincerely, GG | |