| = ticking away... | Romulus Campan [01.Feb.13 23:41] |
| There's something pure in your poem... A solitude of communion with the aura/ectoplasm of your dreams, nothing angry, even if sad, just an expectation creating more dreams, copies of copies until the original dream doesn't matter, and where the time itself becomes an embracing ally, not an enemy... You have become lost in the multiple layers of your dreams... Yes, you realise the everything but two, nevertheless... Recommendable... rc | |
| = * | Paul Gabriel Sandu [02.Feb.13 01:03] |
| thank you very much for your attentive reading, and for your insightful commentary; i think You got it all right. paul | |
| = beautiful image | Bodea Diana Mihaela [06.Feb.13 16:35] |
| I find your poem very gentle but in the same time quite firm. From the line ... you can never tell ... I felt as if the poem remained open as if there is still something you have not said, like a decision that is not yet final. Light shines and can be clearly seen only in the dark ... sight ... eyes ... the mirror of the soul. Beautiful image. GG | |
| = * | Paul Gabriel Sandu [07.Feb.13 22:30] |
| Thank you, Diana! I don't think there can be something more pleasing, for someone who writes, than finding out that the his text is continuously being written by the readers. paul | |
| = Beautiful images | Alina Maria Ivan [15.Feb.13 10:00] |
| ”i will grow a new lung in the dark” is an image that makes this text a poem of loneliness. ”indigo of absence” and I could go on finding images that I love in this poem. Alina | |
| = * | Paul Gabriel Sandu [16.Feb.13 17:55] |
| thank you, Alina! I'm glad you liked my text! | |
| = Expansion of time | John Willy Kopperud [07.Mar.13 10:37] |
| and of images. This poem is written in a mood that lets the reader stumble upon a number of associations. And a number of really good images certainly helps too. Cheers from Willy | |
| = * | Paul Gabriel Sandu [31.Mar.13 02:11] |
| thank you, Willy, for having read read my poem (and please accept my apologies for answering so late). i'm glad you've enjoyed it. | |