| + indeed.. | Corina Gina Papouis [18.Feb.13 11:42] |
| It is a good poem that seizes a certain state of mind, or perhaps a feeling we can't move on from, a weakness yet a sweet sweet wine we need to feed the inner self, the beauty or the beast. I loved the tone, reminded me of Bukowski's love for betting on horses while 20% sober 80% poet. Hope you do this again... ps is packets a typo? | |
| = talismanic | Dely Cristian Marian [18.Feb.13 21:01] |
| Dear Corina, I'm glad you liked it. May I say that, having the subject in mind, it's probably the most daring I've written. You mentioned Bukowski, whom I haven' read yet, but I'm now sure I will. And, yes, hope I'll do it again, too. (without any typo, of course) I'm happy with the magic you've adorned my poetry. Thank you! Cheers, dcm | |