| = Congratulations | Türk-König [18.Aug.13 16:03] |
| "The craving for fresh fruit of a child" might be the correct logical grammatical order, but to me it seems slightly ironic in this poem. I´d not change it but put it into another line. The last stanza sounds almost like an haiku. | |
| = thanks | Gabriel Nicolae Mihãilã [14.Oct.13 21:00] |
| for the visit and sign. I wished to be kind of ironic there and maybe a little bit funny...but in a naive way, seems like i almost achieved that. | |