| + a | Corina Gina Papouis [14.Nov.13 14:12] |
| beautiful piece: time cannot be bought or sold. It can be used to the max or allow it to make us idle. I would perhaps get rid of all capital letters from the beginning of each verse - to gain more intimacy for the reader. tic toc, C :p | |
| = =LC= | Gunsel DJEMAL [17.Nov.13 13:21] |
| Time...your heart it can not be bought or sold. Thank you Corina! "Lower Case" indeed. | |