| = suggestion | Corina Gina Papouis [02.Jan.14 13:29] |
| Try and reshape some of the verses, maybe get rid of some of the unnecessary words and it will hopefully look and read better. Polish spelling as well please! Example: and my rain heated, in steams of longing melt and what fierce longing, Love what stupid longing (this repetition is rather heavy and unnecessary) Kind regards! | |